·经检查，我们发现……因此要求你方修改信用证条款为……

On perusal, we find that ... Therefore , we are asking you to amend your L/C to read....

·请按如下要求修改第320号信用证。

Please amend L/C No. 320 as follows......

·仔细检查信用证后，我方要求你方做如下修改:…

After we have checked the L/C carefully, we request you to make the follow-ing amendments :

·请删除“用直达轮装运”的条款。

Please delete / cancel / cross off the clause “ by direct steamer?

·请加入“在香港转船”的条款。

Please insert / add the clause “Transshipment at Hongkong"